Tuesday, March 10, 2015

SOL- 9/31 March 9th Biking Part 1

I'm sitting on my patio, the summer's wind slightly blowing in my face. The sun is high up in the sky, and its shining onto the bright green grass, and snow-free roads. It's no longer winter, meaning no snow, no cold weather, and no school. And best of all, my birthday and vacations. I check my phone. 11:45. When I finally decide to go inside, my dad says,
"Our neighbors are going bike riding and they were wondering if we wanted to go."
"Sure!"
Today's weather is perfect, not too hot, not too cold. Perfect to go ride around on bikes. I go into my garage to get my bike, then back outside to my neighbors driveway, where they are waiting for me and my dad. We get on our bikes, and off we go.

(Part 2 will be on Wednesday)

7 comments:

  1. Sounds like a perfect day for a bike ride! I especially liked the part where you described how it was no longer winter and mentioned that there was no school, it was a very nice touch.

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  2. oohh i like this i like how you describe winter being gone!

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  3. oohh i like this i like how you describe winter being gone!

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  4. I love biking. So much. Fun slice.

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  5. I like how the story felt in general, it is simple but kept me engaged. I would like to suggest one thing however; to change your background. It is distracting and also makes it harder to read the text. Can't wait to read part 2!

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  6. I like how the story felt in general, it is simple but kept me engaged. I would like to suggest one thing however; to change your background. It is distracting and also makes it harder to read the text. Can't wait to read part 2!

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  7. I like how the story felt in general, it is simple but kept me engaged. I would like to suggest one thing however; to change your background. It is distracting and also makes it harder to read the text. Can't wait to read part 2!

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