Ode to the Sun
Oh sun. Without you,
What would we do?
No light, no heat.
Well, only artificial light,
Only artificial heat.
Without you, there would
Be no plants,
No me, no you.
Any that is why I love you.
Sometimes I wonder…
Will you disappear?
So no light, no heat,
Would be here?
Just the moon, and us.
But no you.
No joy, no fun, no you.
Why would you leave?
Oh Sun, Oh Sun,
I love you.
I like how you repeated yourself. I agree, what would we do without it?
ReplyDeleteI agree with Willa, the repetition ties the entire thing together, nice work.
ReplyDeleteI like how you repeated too, it was a really good idea. Nice Job! :)
ReplyDeleteI love the rhyme scheme in this poem, it has a very musical quality.
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